Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Birds of a Feather

Birds of a Feather

you’re not listening
sometimes you hear but
rarely understand as
you sit in the
wooden chair
whose roots are much
more grounded than my
loftily searching mind

you talk,
I listen, we all
hear, they chatter
and that’s how it goes
with these kind of days

maybe you’re a
mockingbird
            hearing everything
and repeating it as I
want it to be heard
like a familiar echo,
the kind that are
forever out of reach,
a mountaintop away
and every bit as empty

and me?
I’m the songbird
searching for a tune
when she’s lost her voice
or maybe I’m just hiding
in the valley where
there are no echoes

sometimes you watch
we all do
but even in a tree
hidden within a forest of
chirping you’d think
someone other than a
songbird could hear
through the stationary
branches barring
true melodies

and I’m sleepy
always sleepy in the
mornings
maybe I’m not a
songbird, but
 a mourning dove
waiting to be noticed

can you be a
mourning dove too?
come, lament the woes of
a songbird in disguise
and all the kind hearts
who are never far
enough away

3 comments:

  1. The final stanza is especially haunting. Thought-provoking too.

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  2. Oh my gosh, this is beautiful!

    It's hard to narrow down my favourite lines, because I absolutely adore every syllable of this poem! But I think this part is my favourite:

    "you’re not listening
    sometimes you hear but
    rarely understand as
    you sit in the
    wooden chair
    whose roots are much
    more grounded than my
    loftily searching mind"

    :)

    PS - I posted this here as well, because I know I love comments on my own blog and figured you would, too!

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  3. I think haunting is good...but I'm truly glad it's thought-provoking, I like when I write things that make people question and think :) And thank you Shayli, I love that you always comment on my posts. I'm going to go express my love for your poetry on your blog in just a minute!

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